Paper Evaluation

The McCandless Response essay is the work that I feel best represents my writing ability. I would give mine a middle grade. I wrote a clear thesis and displayed a convincing argument. After reviewing the essay I found a few grammar errors and the essay also started to lack towards the end of the paper. The conclusion came pretty suddenly and should have been more extensive. In order to give my essay the high grade, It would need a much clearer thesis and a strong argument throughout the entire paper. It would also need a better build up to the conclusion so it did not come so unexpectedly.